tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8645596108270490005.post5987509813909571197..comments2023-12-25T00:22:13.273-08:00Comments on The White Space Inside the Poem: Model PoemsUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8645596108270490005.post-22146450248101392712014-01-10T12:07:06.005-08:002014-01-10T12:07:06.005-08:00Good idea, Michael. Tying into now.Good idea, Michael. Tying into now.susan grimmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00823157606004918590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8645596108270490005.post-11048987188235227872014-01-10T12:06:40.044-08:002014-01-10T12:06:40.044-08:00Exactly.Exactly.susan grimmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00823157606004918590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8645596108270490005.post-41748212408808246722014-01-10T11:23:13.669-08:002014-01-10T11:23:13.669-08:00Maybe something from Amiri Baraka (Leroi Jones), a...Maybe something from Amiri Baraka (Leroi Jones), a force for social justice who just died. Michael Lawlesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07872581133344179082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8645596108270490005.post-83608098645221276862014-01-09T18:33:28.568-08:002014-01-09T18:33:28.568-08:00I like rhythms. This afternoon I was tapping out ...I like rhythms. This afternoon I was tapping out "The Garden of Prosperpine" (well, the penuntimate verse) as if it were a score to be played on bongos. I like the way the lines alternate between ending on an up-beat and on a down-beat, and then it breaks into dactyls in the penultimate line...<br />I'd never write that... but I love the rhythm.Geoffrey A. Landishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04518496779546782434noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8645596108270490005.post-77890843367631098232014-01-09T17:42:16.610-08:002014-01-09T17:42:16.610-08:00True - abt the models. For me, stories like The Sw...True - abt the models. For me, stories like The Swimmer, or The Things They CArried.mary grimmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04294368835776483342noreply@blogger.com